Envy [Poem]

[Dante]

Just a little three-part poem I did about Envy, Dante and Hoenhiem. Enjoy! ^_^
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Envy

I: Son
The night is cold
My breath swirls around my
Face as I sigh
The night is cold
But I can’t feel it
That’s what you always say
Isn’t it?
‘You-can’t-feel’
Spelling it out for me
Like I’m a child
Who doesn’t understand
Maybe I am
Maybe I am a stubborn child
Who doesn’t want
To admit they’re scared,
Sad, and lonely
The night is cold
I’ll make my heart colder
I don’t want to feel these soft, warm feelings
I want to feel the rough unstable anger
Don’t I?
Maybe
I won’t be miserable anymore
If I make everyone miserable with me

II: Mother
You’re scared of me
Your anger is a mask
I can tell
You are afraid
Of what you do not know
I was your son
Now I’m…
Now you don’t know
What I am
So you put on this mask
Of malice and power
But you’re afraid
Maybe if I break that mask
You won’t be able
To hide anymore
Mother is what you were
Master is what you are
Dead is what I want you to be

III: Father
You created me
You killed me
You left me
You wanted me
You rejected me
You loved me
You hated me
You are my father
You are a stranger
You are kind and caring
You are malicious and cruel
You are someone I want to find
You are someone I never want to see
You are everything I want to be
You are everything I despise
You are no one to me

[Edward Elric]

I love it

[Envy]

Wonderful, I really like how you have 3 different poetries about Envy using those people connected to him and himself. Really lovely job. Keep up the beautiful work as always and hope to see more ^_^

[Dante]

thanks you so much guys! ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Ace Squire]

Not bad.

[Dante]

Okie Dokie ya'll, here's a little drabble I did in English class. We had to use this weeks vocab words to make a paragraph and I had FMA on the brain cause I just finished reading volume 10 of the manga, so this is what came out.

((FYI: I play Envy on another forum I'm on and we decided on that forum that his real name was Livius von Hoenhiem))

Livius von Hoenhiem was one of a conspiring nature. It was prevalent in all of his actions, in every word he spoke. Although his dominant sin was that was envy, greed was a problem as well. He stalked the weak and strong; prying their hopes and dreams and worldly possession from them. Miserly in nature, he would hoard this pleasure for himself, not allowing his companions to get more than their share and giving them meager portions when he could help it. For him, the joy and perverse pleasure aroused in his soulless being was too tantalizing for his lustful self to resist. To his twisted mind, the pleasure of destroying strangers was an appetizer. It was made to prepare his devilish appetite for the exquisite taste of the bountiful pleasure from his revenge completed on the fatherless maggot who ruined his life before leaving him with that termagant. The hag who was impudent enough to call herself his master; and unlike the countless other cowards who failed to keep the same pledge he had made, Livius knew he would not balk if finally given the opening to achieve his goal. No, he could not bear his existence if he passed up the opportunity to kill his father and taste that sadistic pleasure in the man’s death.