Post by arufan1 on Feb 13, 2007 14:37:31 GMT -5
Name: Suteneko, Neko (nickname), Suki (old name)
Gender:Female
Age:14
Appearance:
Race: Chimera.
Creator: Derek
Alchemist: No.
Abilities: Claws that unsheathe when she's angry, fangs, and eyes that can see in the dark.
Weaknesses: Water and catnip.
History: Suki was born in a small village. She grew up with Derek and they were very close friends, that is, until his father went insane and forced Derek to turn the entire village into chimeras. He helped Suki escape, but not before giving her cat ears and a tail. He also erased her memory, which is why she now calls herself Neko. She recently got her memory back, but still calls herself Neko. The cat DNA is slowly taking over her body and she will eventually either turn into a cat or die.
Name: Derek
Gender:Male
Age:14
Appearance:
Race:Human.
Alchemist: Yes, but not a state alchemist. He can transmute chimeras with a strange kind of alchemy.
Weakness: Neko.
History: Same as above. He is pretty much stalking Neko begging for forgiveness and telling her he loves her. Neko thinks he changed a lot, but he doesn't think so. He only wears black now and randomly appears, startling everyone in the room. He always goes to comfort her when she cries and knows ALL her habits.
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Please, please, PLEASE tell me if you think they're a Mary-sue and Gary-sue or anything. Thanks! ;D
Gender:Female
Age:14
Appearance:
Race: Chimera.
Creator: Derek
Alchemist: No.
Abilities: Claws that unsheathe when she's angry, fangs, and eyes that can see in the dark.
Weaknesses: Water and catnip.
History: Suki was born in a small village. She grew up with Derek and they were very close friends, that is, until his father went insane and forced Derek to turn the entire village into chimeras. He helped Suki escape, but not before giving her cat ears and a tail. He also erased her memory, which is why she now calls herself Neko. She recently got her memory back, but still calls herself Neko. The cat DNA is slowly taking over her body and she will eventually either turn into a cat or die.
Name: Derek
Gender:Male
Age:14
Appearance:
Race:Human.
Alchemist: Yes, but not a state alchemist. He can transmute chimeras with a strange kind of alchemy.
Weakness: Neko.
History: Same as above. He is pretty much stalking Neko begging for forgiveness and telling her he loves her. Neko thinks he changed a lot, but he doesn't think so. He only wears black now and randomly appears, startling everyone in the room. He always goes to comfort her when she cries and knows ALL her habits.
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Please, please, PLEASE tell me if you think they're a Mary-sue and Gary-sue or anything. Thanks! ;D
